Archive for the ‘Crime’ Category

Schooling the School Old School: Detective Sergeant Nicholas Drumm

Published by ObscureWriter on October 27th, 2011

As a kid, I liked the wordplay and banter of fictional detectives, from old movies of the 40s and 50s all the way to shows like Hawaii Five-O and The Streets of San Francisco.  One of the memories I had as a child was seeing some actor with a voice box warning me on TV to never smoke.  I didn’t know who he was until last year, but when I found he was William Gargan, the voice of Barrie Craig, and heard him in his prime, I realized there was something in his characters that carried over to the nobility of his final announcement.

There’s just something about detectives, those lone lawmen trying to make the world less dark one criminal at a time, often while struggling with their own demons, that makes for a mesmerizing read.  I have to admit I have a bias toward a setting where the main character isn’t protected by a slew of law enforcement apps, and everything important is kept in a file cabinet.

I’ll be buying David Anderson’s debut Det. Sergeant Drumm book on Amazon soon, and updating this writer profile then, but in the meantime, here are an excerpt of An Indecent Death and a link to Detective Sergeant Nicholas Drumm, with a thought-provoking post on the occasional desolation of America, as experienced by a tourist.

From Chapter 1 of An Indecent Death by author David Anderson:

The victim was wearing a short, black skirt and a sheer blouse, also black, over a white tube top. She was shoeless. Everything was grubby with dirt; the corpse had not been wrapped in a sheet or plastic or anything at all. There was no blood. What emerged was a woman, likely in her thirties, who had once been attractive, maybe even beautiful, although it was hard to tell for sure with the contorted features and all the dirt.

Drumm was struck, as he always was, at how utterly devoid of life and personality a corpse was. Whatever had made this young woman who and what she was had long since departed.

Once the body was fully exposed, Sigrid Brandt got down on her haunches for a closer look. “There’s your likely COD,” she said, pointing to marks around the victim’s neck. “Looks like she was strangled.” She continued her examination, carefully rolling the body onto its side and then letting it settle gently back down again.

An Indecent Death centers on Drumm’s investigation of a seemingly placid elementary school setting.  As he delves into the circumstances surrounding a seventh grade teacher’s death, a host of unsettling suspects emerges.  A creepy janitor, an abusive spouse, the principal, and an unstable fifth-grade teacher all vie for top suspect.  From the reviews, it appears Mr. Anderson is able to keep the reader guessing until the end, all the while entertaining with the detective’s personal subplots.

I’ll know for sure soon when I read it!

Follow the good sergeant at @NicholasDrumm.


Erin Hart: Secret-Keeper of the Bogs

Published by ObscureWriter on October 17th, 2011

I remember reading about peat bogs in eighth grade when I was writing article reviews for science class.  There was only one black-and-white photo in the article, but the image remains in my mind: a man’s withered face, eyelids drooping, lips stiffened into an eternal bemused grin.  He was over 2,000 years old.

I’d like to say that knowing about peat bogs has benefited me in my adult life previously, but I can do so now; I’ve come to find an appreciation for the works of Erin Hart, a crime writer specializing in mysteries built around the time-obscuring effects of these bogs.

Her three novels comprise a series featuring Irish archaeologist Cormac Maguire and American pathologist Nora Gavin.  The first, Haunted Ground, centers upon the mystery and identity of a beautiful bog-preserved woman.  Intrigue abounds in the nearby village, as landowner Hugh Osborne is investigated again by police office Garrett Devaney for the disappearance of his wife and young son two years ago.  As the bog and village give up their secrets, the protagonists realize more murders may soon occur.  In Lake of Sorrows, Maguire and Gavin team up again, this time to unearth the connection between an Iron Age corpse and a nearby, fresher discovery, both of whom died through a ritual extinction called “the triple death”.  And in False Mermaid, Nora and Gavin attempt to solve twin mysteries, one in Ireland and one in America: the riddle of a local woman vanished 100 years ago, and the race to unearth the identity of Nora’s sister’s killer.

Combining folklore and well researched archaeology and forensics, the series is a fine remedy for those feeling hyperconnected to these modern times; the books remind us that for some, the past is still alive, and fatal.

Erin Hart invites you to view her website and purchase her books at http://erinhart.com.


When It Raines, It Pours Blood

Published by ObscureWriter on July 19th, 2011

I head down a set of stairs from a room unknown to me.

Where am I? I ask myself. It’s dark and I am without a torch. Oh Lord, I’m scared. I stop on what appears to be the last step of the staircase. Again I ask myself: where am I? I slowly step off the last step.

Scared and tensed up. My limbs — dead weight — ache. I hear a noise. “Who’s there?” I call out, surrounded only by darkness. I can’t see. It’s too dark. I use my hands to feel my way along a wall. Tears start to seep from my eyes. The panic has begun to set in. It’s so cold. If it were light I’d be able to see my breath.

I come to what appears to be a door. I try to find the handle. A cold metal touch. Got it! I take a deep breath and push.

It’s locked.

I panic more. Wanting to give up. Wanting to scream out for help. I can hear a clock, distant, smothered. Like it’s in a black snowfall. I head towards the ticking using my hands across the wall to guide me. I feel a breeze where I stand. Blind hands feel. It’s a window. I could climb out if I open it. It’s locked as well. “Help me!” I cry out. “Please, this isn’t funny.” Tears filling my voice.

My foot catches an object as I move away from the window. I pick it up. It’s a brick. I go back to the window. Holding the brick tight I smash it against the window hoping it will break. No luck. Again I hit the window. Still nothing. One last time I get the brick and thrust it at the window. It cracks. I’m getting somewhere. Once more against the window. It breaks. Finally I can get out. I smash the rest of the glass out the window so I do not cut myself.

There’s a light outside I can see just a little. I turn around the room looks burnt out, mouldy and unclean. I turn back to the window and peer out. Not good. It’s an apartment block; I’m about twenty stories high. A door in the apartment opens and ten men in white suits enter. “Thank God you’re here! I’ve been trapped.”

They don’t speak or look at me. “Excuse me!” No answer. “Am I invisible?” Apathy stifles rage. “Will someone help me please?” I shout at them. Again no answer.

They talk amongst themselves. From upstairs, one states, “There’s a body up here.” Three men head towards the same staircase I walked down, still oblivious to me. I follow them up the staircase. It occurs to me this must be a dream. I’m going to wake up soon. I reach the top of the stairs.

Blood rushes from my face. I feel helpless. I look at the body in horror. My eyes begin to fill up with tears. It’s me. My body. I’m dead. Its over.

Raine Evans is a crime writer from the UK. He runs Writers United on Facebook and can also be found on Twitter @raine_evans and Writers United.

If you would like to collaborate with Raine, or leave a small tip for him for this story “Darkness Unknown”, his PayPal/email address is evans.raine at Gmail.


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